everyone had really kind things to say, and honestly it was pretty encouraging. i figured out the chorus after i managed to cool down. i think im happy with it. theres only a few more wrinkles to smooth out before i would call the whole thing done.
Kult: +20
Kull: +5
Total: 25
Ratio: 4.00
after that. uh. its just a matter of getting someone with actual musical ability to pick it up.