♠ hated by @recurringRenegade
MY CHEMICAL QUADRANTS WAS MAINSTREAM POSER SHIT ANYWAYS. HOPE YOU GET THRU THIS
Kull: +15
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I think you fumbled with the last line. Could've said something like "wonder why it is the net's pushing your hand towards your bulge when it could be gripping iron or blade to aggrieve against the system designed to kill you bit by bit" or something. I'm not a writer. Just think that stuff's cool. And that line could immediately put someone in the headspace of resisting because of sensory shit. Which is cool. And what we want. #nsfw #fightback
Kull: +5
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