it'S #pailingseason and you'RE without a matesprit. someone you know well - who you don'T pay much attention to needs a little help, so you agree to "fill" the quad with each other just to get by. later, you two pail as needed. it doesn'T mean anything, right? but why does he look so handsome? why does it feel so good? then, in a rush, his lips press hotly against yours. you feel yourself tense up - you haven'T felt this red. never before. not even with other partners. #nsfw #rankbait #alltimephuntrgreatpost
why? thiswouldbe. primetime for rankbait.
the forced breeding from pailing season... pailing that'S meant to mean nothing... shifting into on-the-spot flushed feelings... and it still wasn'T enough for you? i'M sorry for the disappointment.
Theidea is there. Ithink you could workshop it. It doesn't invoke anything because you are taking a tell dont show approach. Icanhelpyouwith the descriptive imagery.
i appreciate the honesty, brash critique, and the kindness to help me do better
heheheofcourse. i lovewriting. andyouhaveagoodidea!
I genuinely started bawling my fucking eyes oout man
It's soo oover
i love this so much! dire situations blooming some of the brightest flames of red are always so good kudos! @u@