Concept: Picking up bad habits to get closer to your redcrush They smell of smoke lingers on their clothes, wherever they go, and even when they leave the room. Every time you see or smell anyone lighting up you end up thinking of them, causing the once intolerable second-hand smoke now becomes a comforting smell. Watching them struggle to strike up a nearly dead lighter, you get the idea to ask if you can have a cigarette. Sharing a bad habit with someone you care about. Desperate to get close to them. And so you can always have their scent on you wherever you go. They give you one, and you put it in your mouth, but the lighter is now fully dead. So instead they press their cigarette to yours and inhale, sparking up your cigarette from the embers of their own. Ash falls on the ground between you as you begin to inhale too. Smoke fills your lungs as you stare into their eyes. And in that moment you realize you've always had an addiction, and smoking is now just the second one you've developed. @archiveAddict (tags: #rankbait, #Reader/Crush, #Reader/Redcrush, #is redcrush even a term, #suggestive, #substances, #cigarette kiss, #smoking, #addictions, #am i doing this right, #archive rating: M)
I obviously ain't as good at this as Senpai, but I did my best to accommodate to a more troll mindset, I suppose.
This is very vivid, Phil, in a good way!
Ah jeez Pete it's kinda embarrassing that you even saw this, let alone you're givin' me praise. This kinda scenario building dealio feels a lot more like your wheelhouse.
If it's more in my wheelhouse, that would make my review of it all the more weighty, no? I'll be honest, I struggle to have the kinda confidence you have to share a bit of writing like this. It's admirable, my friend.
Fair point there pal. Still, What can I say? I've had a pretty decent teacher. And as long as they like it then, well, that's all that really matters yeah? But it's been pretty fun puttin' myself out there experiencin' these trolls culture. Reminds me of the old arbitrator days. Guess old dogs like us can still learn new tricks.
Guess we can. It's definitely been an interesting experience being on here!
Every time you see or smell anyone lighting up you end up thinking of them, causing the once intolerable second-hand smoke now becomes a comforting smell. this is so vivid especially as someone very sensitive to smells and as someone who connects smells to different emotions and feelings very acutely this made me shiver behind my screen! Sharing a bad habit with someone you care about. Desperate to get close to them. And so you can always have their scent on you wherever you go. #marking #scentmarking and #corruption at the same time! They give you one, and you put it in your mouth, but the lighter is now fully dead. So instead they press their cigarette to yours and inhale, sparking up your cigarette from the embers of their own. cigarette kissing is one of my all time favorite intimate motifs ii really cant get enough! 0///v///0 ive written about them once before but this is so so good i cant sttop rereading it hh KUDOS! ❤︎
Ha ha! You're gonna make an old dog blush here, Senpai! I'm glad ya like it. I hoped to pay you back somehow for takin' me under your wing so maybe I'll try my hand at this again another time.